Waiting in the foyer..
for my airliner to arrive..
saw two love birdies
on with a tiff,
that too on a thrive.
After a while....
They looked into each others eyes..
and smiled over their silly tiff.
Soon dropped into each others arms
and shared a Kiss..
She asked,"why do you wanna go?"
He said,"Seeds of Our future to Sow.."
"You'll come back soon give me a vow..
and please never forget me as u go.."
"oh!dear, why do you say so..
I'll always be yours and you mine..u know!"
Both were hand in hand
but not beyond my gaze..
I could see tears roll down their face..
They cuddled each other
So warmly...
that made me feel namby.
Their minds and hearts..
battling.
Pain of departure..
so distressing..
Oh even i could Feel it happening..
Closed my eyes...
and put HIM an orison-
Let their knot ties..
without any denies.
When opened..
Saw no one around,
but thr sweet aura was still surround..
Smiled myself,with a hope..
Even i'll get someone one day...
'coz no one here come for a-lone stay...
-its SR
good work buddy!!!
ReplyDeletesuperb like!!gud observation n presentation..
ReplyDeleteagain great job.
ReplyDelete2gud..never stop writing...bt dnt lie on air(radio)..kdng..akshada joshi
ReplyDeletehey d poem is 2 awsome nd really gud... nd dnt feel alone u will meet sum1 n lyf who will luv u so much dat 2 in filmy style is wat i wish till den wait...!!!!
ReplyDeleteand talking abt d poem as i said dat d best part i loved was dat u blessed d couple 4 der happines nd der 2geatherness i.e dey stay 2geather 4ever while dey wer gettin apart .. secondly ur skill of knitting various emotions is really gud...nd understanding part of it must say dat u felt der emotions wthout use of wrds thru der gestures is again really gud .. mst say u hav gud sense of observence... nd really a beautiful heart 2 undrstand wch brought out such heart touching poetry... sonali
@Sonali:realy appreciate ur words n ur humbleness..thanks a ton..
ReplyDeletemore than my poem its ur words tat touched my heart..u'v triggered my motivation level..thanks again!
@ashu(the itinerant):thanks guru!!!keep showering ur blessings!!
ReplyDeleteya i do wish dat u keep up dis as ur hobby though wount luk at it as a profession... its a creativity skill blessed 2 u make use of it 2 inhance urself is wat i wist.. waiting patiently 4 1 more such beaUTIFUL POST...!!! SONALI...
ReplyDeleteHey its really awesum yar.... its really a touchy poem...as ritely said by sonali i lykd ur lang ur observatin skill very much....keep it up...GO GOING.....
ReplyDeleteNd BEST WISHES DUDE...
MRUNAL
thanks a million guys!!
ReplyDeletetat was really touching.... i liked it....2 gud.
ReplyDeletenice work dude..!!!!!
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